2020-2021 Mono League 3 Results

01 The Long Way Home by Vicky Sinclair

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Judge's comments: Score 18. Atmospheric treatment, well composed. Picture postcard feel.

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Full results from judge Kathy Chantler on 15 Feb 2021

GroupRankScoreAuthorJudging sequence & TitleComments
C120Peter Cotton14 A Light In The DarknessDynamic and forceful, beach huts, benches & light dominate – well composed. Outstanding composition & courage with all the black.
 219James McCracken30 Ponte De Le Bande By NightEnjoying wide angle view – variations in tones – steps lit, canal reflections – good not to place person – viewer can place self in scene – shadow of someone may have been quite spooky!
 318Peter Cotton32 Sand ImpressionsCreative imagination – fossil effect, love the ‘eye’ plenty of detail to hold attention – check edges – a few strenuous bits better removed
 318Ian Shaw06 Hawthorn In The MeadowAll about shape & texture – lightning strike – uneven cloning right of lowest branch – sky good land a bit messy, superb composition
 517Hilary Moore12 The Eye Of The RhinoFantastic texture – eye not pin sharp, high pass filter? Brighten slightly to give illusion of sharpness & vignette; amazing detail on skin
 517James McCracken09 Be Sure To Wear Some Flowers In Your HairInteresting setting, windows very bright, posed demurely, need to see left eye, hair fantastic, position well in frame
 716Hilary Moore23 Frozen Memories In The Children’s CemetryViewer has to bring knowledge & understanding – brighten teddy to emphasise its presence?  Snow wrapping grave like a blanket
 815Lai Chan11 Woofsa Daisy! It Wasn’T Me 
 914Emyr Williams25 Just KidsCute faces, quizzical, detail in setting – fur of animals dark and lacks detail needs a bit more light – shame about tags on ears – worth the Photoshop – maybe tidy ground a bit
 914Ian Shaw21 Reed ReflectionsWell seen – super distortion in water, water very messy – could be tidied, white speckled area?  Reduce noise in image – smoothness would be beneficial, check edges carefully at taking and processing
 1113Emyr Williams07 Keen Eyed Mountain GuideNeed to see more of his keen eyes, hillside indistinct and noisy, maybe tidy face a bit, bring out some texture on fleecy top, white blob right – interesting character but background lets it down
B120Jim Turner26 Winter Scene LofotenPlenty of detail – sharp all through – tonal range excellent, interest everywhere – eyes wander around but return to bright stones centre, sky perfect for the scene – sky & sea neutral balancing detail elsewhere
 217Richard Anthony18 The Strength Of The WebVery wet – weighted down great mix of flowers & web – enormous strength evident
 316Philip Byford29 Lake Scene In IrShape of water with swans leading in to people – detail in IR – very white and bright – rather a lot of image not adding new information 
 316Jim Turner15 Hiding From The Big BoysBlue tint works well – open and well posed – good to see reflection – rope on left distracting – remove! Or have more – good use of negative space.
 515Brian Howard20 PelicanPhotogenic, fantastic detail on body – head less well defined – distractions in background under beak & stone – well positioned in frame
 515Mike Mitchell22 Full Steam AheadCan smell the steam – engine well positioned – quite a few distractions – people on left, posts on right & left (part), crack repair on bridge – details  – you don’t have control; of what’s there so it’s harder work to repair afterwards
 515Philip Byford16 The Bell TowerNorthern feel to this with blackness on brickwork, bright sun from behind – white vignetting, good detail in flint – architectural detail shot
 814Brian Howard05 Medium Decorative DahliaSuits mono – enhances petal shapes, plenty of shadow & background context – insect or two would have added interest
 814Richard Anthony03 Rear GuardFeels prickly, good lead in with focus on base  – lacks interest, these at their best with warm back-light
 1013Mike Mitchell17 Snowy TrackGates look as if they need replacing! Need to see more of the track – disappears off the edge 1/3 way up.  Capture of snow on trees good, bright patch top right  (crop down?) – lacks definition – next time – lower viewpoint and to your left
A119Sue Case08 One Winters MorningPlenty of detail in snow & trees, composition excellent with figures & dog, high key but not glaring
 218John Humphrey28 HavanaSo much to see: detail everywhere – people set the scene, former grandeur evident, detailed and interesting – eye drawn back down to people on left – interaction there
 218Rob Harley04 RebeccaGood pose & control of light, shapes made in pose striking & angular (see bottom half of back and legs)
 218Vicky Sinclair01 The Long Way HomeAtmospheric treatment, well composed. Picture postcard feel.
 517Linda van Geene31 Who’s ThereWell posed – lamp detail ‘providing’ light bright eyes – maybe tone face down a little
 517Sue Case33 Cobwebs In The FrostLike jewellery, DoF considered, strings of pearls!
 716John Humphrey10 FreesiaFlower looks 3D – well defined and plenty of detail – almost a bit dirty, bacground textured but is its weak point
 716Rob Harley27 Unknown Passer ByPortrait crop good, simple & effective subject – position model further back (you probably had control) opportunity well seen – texture in walls and ground
 915Linda van Geene13 Hopefully Woolwich Before It RainsLooks very statuesque & driver’s face very bright, a bit of movement or someone doing something maybe; background less focussed would be better – so much detail to absorb – eyes going everywhere,
 1014John Marshall02 GatedLooks uncomfortable – profile good but like to see eye, light strange on body & top left, hue not right, grass stems intrusive.
 1014John Marshall24 Double HelliboreSquare crop good – lacks feeling of depth – rather flat – leaf on left bright and pointing way out of image – ok at bottom – hard to do flowers well
 1014Vicky Sinclair19 Bad NewsNot much good news these days, dumped in puddle – large area of black & reflection on left – needs to part of a group to tell full story